Response to Tammy Ho’s “Marvellous banality”

“Marvellous banality” Is an exceptional poem by Tammy Ho.
I have found myself both inspired and learning a great deal from her poetry.
This is my response to her poem that includes some thoughts about truth as well.
I love your “Marvellous banality” 
truths turn and twist
spiraling inside and out
traveling round and about
then journeying far
to the heat of our hearts
the cold of our feet
the taste of our hands
The visions so sweet
How can I resist
these images’ twists
best not to speak
The Fates not to tempt
our hour will come
when all will be done
in mind’s eye’s care
We will be there
Yamabuki
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